{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17808145","dateCreated":"1260121581","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"ssslo","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ssslo","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17808145"},"dateDigested":1532390389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"WHAT TO HAND IN","description":"There are only some of us who graded the essays. I can hand turn in our consensus of what grades we give each essay. I will look at what the few of us that did the grading and come to a mutual grade if you all want!!!!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17808847","body":"That's fine with me!","dateCreated":"1260123817","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"MelKat25","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MelKat25","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17824421","body":"Sounds good. If you need help with that Sarra, let me know. I will be up for a while tonight =)","dateCreated":"1260153636","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mdap13","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mdap13","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17830401","body":"great. I was getting a little worried but as long as you post it in time, that sounds great to me. Thanks!","dateCreated":"1260170466","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"al59501","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/al59501","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"17806911","dateCreated":"1260117111","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"MelKat25","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MelKat25","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17806911"},"dateDigested":1532390389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sorry...pay no attention to my posts!","description":"I was going by the green folder, not the first page of the Wiki. Sorry!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17806879","dateCreated":"1260116958","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"MelKat25","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MelKat25","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17806879"},"dateDigested":1532390389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"VOICE","description":"To Be a Good Teacher-3: The writer tells what they think makes a good teacher, but didn't seem as engaged in the message, as the other two passages.
\nWhat are the Qualities of a Good Teacher-5: The writer personalized the essay and uses their own opinions
\nA Good Teacher-5: The writer wrote their opinions, thoughts and reasons for what makes a good teacher; this passage had the best use of voice (according to the rubric)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17806755","dateCreated":"1260116505","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"MelKat25","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MelKat25","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17806755"},"dateDigested":1532390389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Organization","description":"Cat\/Dog-1: The narrator of this piece does not describe what it means to be "good when they are good" but it relates to the title (which they have)
\nEarth-3: The narrator describes why Earth is great; uses detail; isn't very confusing to read
\nZeena-5: This piece has an inviting introduction, transitions are used, sequencing is logical, details are used; This was the most organized out of the three reading passages.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17806639","dateCreated":"1260115952","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"MelKat25","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MelKat25","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17806639"},"dateDigested":1532390389,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"IDEAS","description":"The Redwoods- 3: The Redwoods had general ideas, and you could see that the narrator was talking about his\/her trip to the Redwoods.
\nFox- 3: Fox is about the boy's dog, but his story tells about what he does when he is at home-hanging out with his dog.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17806543","dateCreated":"1260115641","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"MelKat25","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MelKat25","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17806543"},"dateDigested":1532390390,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"No one read Fox or The Redwoods...","description":"If we read those, they would be scored for Ideas; Cat\/Dog, Earth and Zeena would be scored for Organization; To Be a Good Teacher, What are the Qualities of a Good Teacher, and A Good Teacher would be scored for Voice; A Day as a Rain Drop, One Day I Was Riding, and Frogs would be scored for Word Choice; Mother is Nice, My Most Rewarding Moment, and A&W would be scored for Sentence Fluency; Bud, Remembering Our Flag, and All About Rabbits would be scored for Conventions; Remembering Our Flag, Aunt Leisa, and What Are the Qualities of a Good Teacher would be scored for Presentation.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17801997","dateCreated":"1260070897","smartDate":"Dec 5, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"britjuan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/britjuan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17801997"},"dateDigested":1532390390,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Rubrics","description":"I liked all of the rubrics; however I felt they were too wordy. I do not think it is a good idea to overwhelm students with expectations not directly related to the assignment. While it is important to stress that each assignment be legible, polished, etc., use of words like artful and pleasing can discourage some students who feel they lack creativity and those who are unable to write as legibly as others. These rubrics would be ok for teachers to use for their own personal grading scale, but definitely should not be given to students. Also, trying to focus on so many points can make grading difficult and time consuming \u2013 (time) a luxury teachers have too little of.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17807847","body":"I agree with you, TeJuan!","dateCreated":"1260120558","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"MelKat25","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MelKat25","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"17801989","dateCreated":"1260070853","smartDate":"Dec 5, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"britjuan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/britjuan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17801989"},"dateDigested":1532390390,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Presentation","description":"Presentations
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\nMy expectations for presentations in my future classroom will depend on the grade level in which I teach. Expectations will be consistent with student\u2019s level of achievement in the following areas: legibility, correct spelling, punctuation, grammar usage, and sentence structure. I will encourage my students to perform to the best of their ability and provide accurate models for them to follow. I will not accept papers with stains on them or jagged, raggedy edges to stress the importance of neatness and presentation. I will also provide verbal and written guidelines to ensure that each student is aware of what is expected before the assignment is given.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17759059","dateCreated":"1259947104","smartDate":"Dec 4, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"ssslo","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ssslo","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17759059"},"dateDigested":1532390390,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"CONVENTIONS","description":"Remembering our Flag: I give this essay a 5 for conventions. The writer does demonstrate a good grasp of standard writing conventions. Spelling is generally correct, the punctuation is accurate, grammar and usage are correct.
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\nAunt Leisa: I give this essay a 1 for conventions. With all the spelling and grammar errors it was hard for a reader to understand the first time through. spelling errors, grammar errors, capilization errors, and more.
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\nWhat are the Qualities of a Good Teacher?: I give this essay a 3 for conventions. Spelling is usually correct, however there are many grammar and punctuaion errors. Paragraphing is attempted but is wrong is some areas.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17801827","body":"Conventions
\n6. Remembering our Flag is well written and very expressive. I scored this piece a 3 only because of the misspellings and internal punctuation. Moderate editing would be required to polish the text for publication.
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\nAunt Leisa should be given a 1 because of the numerous spelling and punctuation errors. These errors are very noticeable and require the reader to read once to decode then again for meaning. This text would have to be seriously edited before publication could be considered.
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\nWhat are the Qualities of a Good Teacher should be given a 3. While it is not as well written as Remembering Our Flag, nor as expressive, the spelling is usually correct and there are minimal punctuation errors. Most words are capitalized correctly and only moderate editing would be required.","dateCreated":"1260070163","smartDate":"Dec 5, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"britjuan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/britjuan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17807807","body":"Remembering Our Flag:5 The writer correctly used spelling, punctuation and grammar in an effective and creative way.
\nAunt Leisa:1 There were many consistent spelling errors that made reading this passage difficult.
\nWhat are the Qualities of a Good Teacher:3 This piece is right in the middle- it is easy to read, but there is some editing that needs to be done.","dateCreated":"1260120397","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"MelKat25","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MelKat25","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17824297","body":"Remembering Our Flag- I would give this selection a 5 for Conventions. The spelling is generally correct throughout. The punctuation guides the reader through the selection. The paragraph tends to be sound and reinforces the organizational structure.
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\nAunt Leisa- I would give this selection a 1 for Conventions. The spelling errors are frequent Errors in grammar or usage are noticeable. Capitalization is also random.
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\nWhat are the Qualities of a Good Teacher?- I would give this selection a 3 for Conventions. The spelling is mostly correct with a few punctuation errors. The problems are not serious enough to distort the meaning of the passage. This selection would need some moderate editing for publication.","dateCreated":"1260153402","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mdap13","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mdap13","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"17758535","dateCreated":"1259946670","smartDate":"Dec 4, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"ssslo","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ssslo","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17758535"},"dateDigested":1532390391,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"SENTENCE FLUENCY","description":"Bud: I give this essay a 1 for sentence fluency. As the description intails, 'the reader has to practice quite a bit in order to give this paper a fair interpretive reading.'
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\nRembering Our Flag: I give this essay a 5 for sentence fluency. In the essay you were told to close your eyes and imagine. Well, by doing that it was okay to read the essay aloud with your eyes closed. The sentences flew very nicely. The use of creativeness and appropriate connections between sentences and thoughts show how each relates to, build upon, the one before it.
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\nAll About rabbits: i give this essay a 3 for sentence fluency. The sentences in this essay do not flow together. They do not build upon one another and the reader may get lost moving from sentence to the next. The essay makes sense, but it is not a 5.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17801865","body":"Sentence fluency
\n5. In my opinion, Bud should be scored a 1 because the sentences are choppy and incomplete.
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\nRemembering our Flag is a well written and expressive piece, I think it deserves a 5. Although some punctuation was missing, the sentences were purposeful and varied, adding originality and energy to the piece. The use of creative connectives, and bright descriptive words between sentences and thoughts show how each relates to and builds upon the other.
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\nAll About Rabbits should be scored a 1 because the text is able to he comprehended but it seems more mechanical than fluid, almost routine. Sometimes the reader has to look for clues to show how sentences interrelate. Parts of the text could be seen as expressive; however other parts are choppy and awkward.","dateCreated":"1260070385","smartDate":"Dec 5, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"britjuan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/britjuan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17807487","body":"Bud:1 The sentences are incomplete, choppy and distort the reading for the audience. This piece does not flow at all.
\nRemembering Our Flag:5 The sentences are expressive and flow naturally. This a creative piece that is fluent in meaning and reading.
\nAll About Rabbits:3 The sentences are run-ons, but the message can still be understood. The writer made an attempt to write fluently; this piece is mediochre.","dateCreated":"1260119311","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"MelKat25","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/MelKat25","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17823923","body":"Bud- I would give this selection a 1 for Sentence Fluency. The sentences are very choppy throughout the whole piece. Many sentences begin the same way and many follow the same patterns.
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\nRemembering Our Flag- I would give this selection a 5 for Sentence Fluency. The writer's purposeful and varied sentences add originality and energy, and they engage the reader. The writer has thought about the sounds of the words as well as the meanings.
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\nAll About Rabbits- I would give this selection a 3 for Sentence Fluency. The sentence beginnings are not all alike, but the reader can still understand the main idea of the selection.","dateCreated":"1260152796","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"mdap13","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mdap13","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}