{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17829437","dateCreated":"1260163906","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"jgalka","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jgalka","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17829437"},"dateDigested":1532390386,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"consensus statement","description":"I'm not sure if we're just supposed to talk about the 6+1 traits as a whole or what so... here's what I have...<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThese grading rubrics are excellent. When first looking at the separate rubrics for each trait, it seems like there is too much, however, when reading through some of these papers is it very helpful to have so many options to chose from. Instead of just labeling a paper a 5, you can say more with the letter, what exactly makes it a 5? What needs work? The teacher can just circle the areas that weaknesses or strengths. Also, by having so many different traits, it is easier to zone in on one at a time so that students know exactly what they are to strive for.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17829465","body":"I will post this just for now...I can't find where it said when this was due by so it's better to have something for the consensus than nothing. Anyone can feel free to add or change what I post.","dateCreated":"1260164065","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"jgalka","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jgalka","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17876675","body":"The structure of the rubrics is very good. It provides clear details of what needs to be completed in order to get certain amount of points. 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