{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17870273","dateCreated":"1260231624","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"meggsullivan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/meggsullivan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17870273"},"dateDigested":1532390377,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"4, 5, 6 - Point Scoring Rubrics","description":"I think these rubrics are a great tool for the classroom. Personally, I like the 4 or 5 point rubrics the most. I think these rubrics are straight forward and certaintly provide the grader with enought information that there is no questioning where the points should be given.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17857585","dateCreated":"1260218301","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"Wiechec","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Wiechec","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17857585"},"dateDigested":1532390377,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Rubrics","description":"I feel that all of the rubrics would be very useful as a teacher. The 4-point rubric, I feel should be primarily used for younger grades. As the students get older, the 5 and 6-point rubric can be introduced. Teachers are always creating rubrics, but it is difficult to develop a strong rubric. These rubrics are well-developed. Also, grading all of the students' work with one rubric will help students become better writers. They will realize that all papers, or written assignments, need exceptional ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, conventions, and presentation. These rubrics would be most effective if they were used school-wide, giving students time to master writing.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17860961","body":"I think that these rubrics are effective in helping assess the students work. I would use the 4 pt rubric on smaller assignments and the 6 pt rubric on the pieces that hold more value. The 4 pt obviously is not as specific as the 6 pt. I agree that they should be used school wide so that the students know the expectations of a good paper.","dateCreated":"1260221591","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"jpiatek","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jpiatek","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"17820977","dateCreated":"1260148679","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"meggsullivan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/meggsullivan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17820977"},"dateDigested":1532390378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Group Decision ","description":"Who is going to record the groups decision on the main page?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17821333","body":"I can do that if you guys want. I was looking at everyone's posts. We didn't agree on everything, but it seems as if these scores would pretty much sum everything up. What do you all think?
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\nAlso, I posted one thing about Presentation, but we have to post a consensus on that along with the 4, 5, 6 rubrics....
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\n6 + 1 Traits \u2013 IDEAS
\n\u00b7 Cat\/Dog - SCORE- 1
\n\u00b7 Earth - SCORE- 3
\n\u00b7 Zeena - SCORE- 5
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\n6 + 1 Traits \u2013 ORGANIZATION
\n\u00b7 To be a good Techer - SCORE- 1
\n\u00b7 What are the Qualities of a Good Teacher? - SCORE - 3-5 (this is in between)
\n\u00b7 A Good Teacher - SCORE- 5
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\n6 + 1 Traits \u2013 VOICE
\n\u00b7 A Day as a Rain Drop - SCORE - 5
\n\u00b7 One Day I Was Riding - SCORE - 1
\n\u00b7 Frogs - SCORE- 3
\n\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad\u00ad
\n6 + 1 Traits \u2013 WORD CHOICE
\n\u00b7 Mother is Nice - SCORE- 1
\n\u00b7 My Most Rewarding Moment - SCORE- 5
\n\u00b7 A & W - SCORE - 5
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\n6 + 1 Traits \u2013 SENTENCE FLUENCY
\n\u00b7 Bud - SCORE - 1
\n\u00b7 Remembering Our Flag - SCORE- 5
\n\u00b7 All About Rabbits - SCORE - 3
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\n6 + 1 Traits \u2013 CONVENTIONS
\n\u00b7 Remembering Our Flag - 3-5
\n\u00b7 Aunt Leisa - 1
\n\u00b7 What are the Qualities of a Good Teacher?- 5","dateCreated":"1260149222","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"Wiechec","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Wiechec","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17860749","body":"I agree. I would post a 4 for the sections we are in between.","dateCreated":"1260221381","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"jpiatek","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jpiatek","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17868835","body":"thanks for posting this pam? do we have to write a section about presentation?","dateCreated":"1260230003","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"meggsullivan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/meggsullivan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"17702427","dateCreated":"1259861926","smartDate":"Dec 3, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"Wiechec","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Wiechec","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17702427"},"dateDigested":1532390378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"PRESENTATION","description":"After looking at some of the passages, I realized that expectations for presentation would have to vary by grade level. At the younger grades, when students are first learning how to write, they shouldn't be help at extremely high expectations. At the older grades writing should be expected to have consistent slanting and uniform spacing. All students should be expected to turn in legible work. Also, when using the computer, students should be held at the expectations of the rubric. When being taught how to use a computer for papers, students are usually taught correct fonts, font sizes, spacing, and margins. If this is not followed, they should get points taken off.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17861153","body":"I would not mind being presented with a scratched up, hand-written peice for the first or second draft. I would also understand if it was an inclass assignment and the student had to get it done I would prefer that the student would type all the final assignments. But, I would require that the student turns in all previous drafts so that I could see how much of the students own work went into the piece. To validate that the student is doing their own work, they can also type the final draft in class, or at school.","dateCreated":"1260221760","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"jpiatek","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jpiatek","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17869029","body":"I agree with John. The presentation of work would have to be determined based on the level of students. Also, Joanna I completley agree with your statement about scratched out and hand-written pieces for drafts. I think these types of papers show the hardwork and dedication going into written pieces. Final assignments I beleive should be typed and cleanly presented for the older grades. However, if necessary neat penmanship should be allowed. I think it is important to remember that in the primary grades we need to focus on their handwriting abilities and they should be turning in neat handwrittne assignments.","dateCreated":"1260230185","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"meggsullivan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/meggsullivan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"17680225","dateCreated":"1259821382","smartDate":"Dec 2, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"strubin1987","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/strubin1987","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17680225"},"dateDigested":1532390378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Presentation","description":"After looking at some of the hand-written papers I found many of them hard to read especially the first two examples. In my future classroom, I wouldn't mind if first drafts were turned in hand written but I would not allow scratch offs and want it to be legible. As for the final draft, I would like it to be typed just because it looks neat and more professional.
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\nAs for the 6 point scoring rubric, I think I like the 1, 3, 5 better because it gives a lot of examples on how each student can receive their points and in the 6 point rubric it almost has too many details ranging from experimental, emerging to strong and exceptional. I liked have the three explanations in the 1, 3, 5 and if you thought they fell in between points, then you can do that. The 6 point rubric is too wordy and time consuming.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17680179","dateCreated":"1259821108","smartDate":"Dec 2, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"Wiechec","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Wiechec","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17680179"},"dateDigested":1532390378,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"ORGANIZATION","description":"To Be a Good Teacher- I wasn't too sure what to grade this piece, but I decided on a 1. It lacks an introduction and conclusion, and there is not much connection between topics. It seems as if all the ideas are scattered.
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\nWhat are the Qualities of a Good Teacher?- I would grade this piece a 5. There is a clear introduction and conclusion along with supporting ideas. The different sections flow from one to the other and the ideas appear to be organized.
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\nA Good Teacher- I would also give this paper a 5. There is a clear introduction, but it only has two closing statement, not a conclusion. If the student adjusted this, it would be close to perfect, but I still think the organization deserves a 5.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17802823","body":"To Be a Good Teacher - I think is piece should be given a 1. Just as Laura said, it lacks an opening and a conclusion. The connections between the ideas are confusing and this paper does not flow evenly.
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\nWhat are the Qualities of a Good Teacher? - I would give this piece a 3. While it has an opening, body, and conclusion, I felt that this piece did not flow properly. It seemed somewhat choppy and predictable.
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\nA Good Teacher - I would also give this essay a 5. I thought it had a strong introduction. However, as Laura pointed out, it lacked a conclusion. Otherwise, all of the ideas connected, the pacing is well controlled, and it flows smoothly.","dateCreated":"1260075839","smartDate":"Dec 5, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"PKovach","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/PKovach","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17820407","body":"To Be a Good Teacher - I would score this passage a 1. This passage lacks a clear direction and set of ideas. There is no real opening or conclusion. Also, there is no connection between the ideas used. The organizational problems make it difficult to follow and gain and understanding for the main idea of the passage.
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\nWhat are the Qualities of a Good Teacher? - I would score this passage a 3. This passage has a strong organizational structure. Also, there is a recognizable opening and closing. However, the conclusion is not the traditional conclusion most teachers would be looking for. The transitions help to move form idea to idea. Some logic is used, but more detail would expand this paper and enhance the scoring.
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\nA Good Teacher - I would score this passage a 5. The organization shows the central idea of the story. The introduction is inviting and draws the reader in. Also, the conclusion creates a sense of closure and leave the reader thinking. The passage flows and transitions are used correctly. The title is as creative as this topic allows.","dateCreated":"1260147958","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"meggsullivan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/meggsullivan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17857897","body":"To Be a good Techer- I would score this passage a 1. There is no real conclusion or introduction to the topic. The connection between ideas is confusing. The pacing also feels awkward, the student needs to work on sentence structure.
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\nWhat are the Qualities of a Good Teacher- I would score this passage a 3. The writer should try to avoid using conversational writing (in this essay I will talk about, and thank you for reading my paper. There is a recognizable introduction and conclusion. The sequencing shows some logic. Since the writer used short sentence structure the ideas seemed to be choppy and needs to be more developed so that it flows.
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\nA Good Teacher- I would score this piece a 5. The introduction is well developed. I feel like the student was rushed and could not develop the conclusion as well as the introduction was presented. However, all the ideas flow nicely. The details seem to fit and the sequencing is logical and effective.","dateCreated":"1260218658","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"jpiatek","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jpiatek","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"17680171","dateCreated":"1259821073","smartDate":"Dec 2, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"Wiechec","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Wiechec","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17680171"},"dateDigested":1532390379,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"IDEAS","description":"Cat\/Dog- I would score this piece a 1 in IDEAS. All the students talks about are how cats and dogs want to be good. Although a topic is chosen, there is no central idea besides how they can be good. Also, the topic is way to broad to complete one simple paper on.
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\nEarth- I would score this one a 3. Ideas are presented, but most do not go in much depth. There also does not seem to be one central idea. The student did, however, have multiple ideas.
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\nReena- I would score this piece a 5. There are multiple ideas with quality details. The topic is narrow enough to center on a main idea, which is apparent throughout the writing.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17802759","body":"Cat\/Dog - I would also rate this piece as a 1. Yes, the paper is about cats and dogs, but the information is limited and unclear. The author keeps repeating the same points over and over.
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\nEarth - The ideas are present; however, as Laura said, this piece does not go too much in depth. I would also rate this piece as a 3. If the student could expand on their thoughts a little more, the essay could easily be rated as a 5.
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\nZeena - I give this piece a 5. The topic is narrow and manageable. The writer is obviously writing from experience, which makes the story interesting.","dateCreated":"1260075239","smartDate":"Dec 5, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"PKovach","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/PKovach","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17819993","body":"Cat\/Dog - I would score this passage a 1. The main idea of the passage has no been decided. There is limited information and the length of the passage consists of the same idea repeated over and over again. There is no detail and topic has not yet been defined. The text is very repetitive.
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\nEarth - I would score this passage a 3. The topic is broad, but the writer is headed in the right direction. There is some support but the ideas are no very clear. Also, the writer for the most part stays on topic.
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\nZeena - I would score this passage a 5. The topic is clear and managed well. The details given are appropriate and accurate to the main idea. This writer has drawn his or her details form personal experiences. The reader addresses the question and answers accurately.","dateCreated":"1260147433","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"meggsullivan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/meggsullivan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17857241","body":"Cat\/Dog-I would score this piece a 1. I think the writer has not found a central purpose for the essay. All is said is that these pets are good and it does not go into much detail, which causes it to have limited information that is unclear. The text is also repetitious and the thoughts are randomly spread throughout the piece.
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\nEarth-I would score this piece a 3. The central idea is present but it is broad. The writer also seems to be drawing on their own experience. But they have difficulty going from general observations to specifics so that he\/she can expand on the piece.
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\nZeena-I would score this piece a 5. The topic is very clear and specific. The piece is written from experience which makes the ideas presented original and fun to read. The writer also did a good job at adding details that are relevant and significant to the central theme.","dateCreated":"1260217816","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"jpiatek","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jpiatek","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"17680161","dateCreated":"1259820999","smartDate":"Dec 2, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"Wiechec","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Wiechec","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17680161"},"dateDigested":1532390379,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Voice","description":"A Day as a Rain Drop- I would grade this one a 4 because the writer captures the reader's attention. The voice is on the "safe" side and could use much more energy.
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\nOne Day I was Riding- I would score this one a 1 because the writer takes no risks. The paragraph is monotone. There is no real point of view, and the paragraph comes across as boring.
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\nFrogs- I would score this one a 3. The writer is giving a description. Although it lacks exciting words and a great deal of credibility, the writing is pleasing.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"17680139","dateCreated":"1259820866","smartDate":"Dec 2, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"strubin1987","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/strubin1987","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17680139"},"dateDigested":1532390379,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Conventions","description":"Remembering Our Flag: 5 I would rate this a 5 because the spelling was generally correct, the grammar usage was correct, and paragraphing was good.
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\nAunt Leisa: 1- I would rate this a 1 because spelling errors were frequent. Some errors making it difficult to read.
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\nWhat Are teh Qualities of a Good Teacher?: 5- I would rate this a 5 because all spelling was correct and the story made sense. She had a good grasp of standard writing conventions and there was thorough understanding.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17701875","body":"Remembering Our Flag- I wasn't sure if this one was a 3 or 5 because I did find many more errors than in the last piece. I found a couple punctuation and spelling errors. What does everyone else think?
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\nAunt Leisa- I agree that this one should be a 1. There are multiple spelling errors throughout this piece.
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\nWhat Are the Qualities of a Good Teacher?- I agree that this one should be rated a 5. There are few errors that don't seem to change the meaning of the piece. I writer does seem to grasp an understanding of good writing conventions.","dateCreated":"1259861552","smartDate":"Dec 3, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"Wiechec","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Wiechec","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17802511","body":"Remembering Our Flag - Like Laura, I am not sure if this piece is a 3 or 5. Overall, there were only a few spelling errors. I am not sure sure if this student understands the correct way to use a comma. There were also a few grammatical errors.
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\nAunt Leisa - Without a doubt, this piece is a 1. There are numerous spelling errors.
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\nWhat Are the Qualities of a Good Teacher? - I agree with the both of you. The student seems to understand good writing conventions. There were a few errors in this piece; however, as Laura said, it does not change the meaning of the text. I would also give this student's writing a 5.","dateCreated":"1260073308","smartDate":"Dec 5, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"PKovach","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/PKovach","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17860471","body":"Remembering our Flag- I would rate this a 4. There are a few spelling mistakes and grammatical errors.
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\nAunt Leisa- I would score this piece a 1. There are many spelling mistakes.
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\nWhat are the Qualities of a Good Teacher-I would score this passage a 5. There are few errors in the text. I only caught one spelling mistake.","dateCreated":"1260221143","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"jpiatek","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jpiatek","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17868707","body":"Remembering Our Flag - I would score this passage a either a 4.5 or 5. For the most part the grammar and spelling is correct, there are few errors. There is an understanding for capitalization and grammar is used correctly for the most part. The Paragraphing reinforces the organization of the passage and the writer uses stylistic effects to make the passage intersting.
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\nAunt Leisa - I would score this passage a 1.5. Altought there are frequent spelling errors, the end punctuation is usually correct. There are captizalization issues and problems with the grammar.
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\nWhat are the Qualities of a Good Teacher? - I would score this passage a 5. There are very few grammatical and spelling mistakes. There is a consitent capitalization and the paragraphing is sound.","dateCreated":"1260229839","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"meggsullivan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/meggsullivan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"17680051","dateCreated":"1259820448","smartDate":"Dec 2, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"strubin1987","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/strubin1987","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/fall20096plus1traitsscoring.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/17680051"},"dateDigested":1532390380,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Sentence Fluency","description":"Bud: 1- I would rate this paper a 1 because the sentences were choppy and incomplete. There was little or no sentence sense. Phrasing did not sound natural
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\nRemembering Our Flag: 5 This paper is a 5 because the writing has an easy flow and rhythm. The sentences are well built and expressive. The sentences also vary in length as well as structure. The piece was interesting and engaging.
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\nAll About Rabbits: 3- I would rate this paper a 3 because the story gets the point across but seems to be a bit choppy. Most of the sentences were artfully crafted and constructed correctly.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"17701163","body":"I actually agree with all of these ratings. I think they are a perfect match! I was really impressed that "Remembering Our Flag" was only a fifth grade piece!","dateCreated":"1259861084","smartDate":"Dec 3, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"Wiechec","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Wiechec","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17827877","body":"I think this is the first time that we all agree on each of the ratings.","dateCreated":"1260158784","smartDate":"Dec 6, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"PKovach","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/PKovach","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17859855","body":"Bud-I would rate this piece a 1. The sentences are choppy, incomplete, and awkward. Many sentences also begin in the same way.
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\nRemembering Our Flag-I would rate this piece a 5. There are some mistakes in the piece with segment phrases but it is purposeful and has varied sentence beginnings. This adds originality and energy to the piece. The sentences also vary in length and structure.
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\nAll About Rabbits-I would also rate this a 3. The sentences are usually constructed correctly. Parts f the text invite expressive oral reading. Others are still stiff, awkward and choppy.","dateCreated":"1260220660","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"jpiatek","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jpiatek","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"17868375","body":"Bud - I would rate this piece a 1. The sentences are very choppy and incomplete. The sentences make sense, but because of the choppiness there is no connection between thoughts.
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\nRemembering Our Flag - I would rate this passage a 5. This passage has a great flow and rhythm. The sentences vary in length and provide varied purposes. Also the passage is creative and can easily be read out loud.
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\nAll About Rabbits - I would rate this passage a 2. There is a steady beat about the passage, but there is some choppiness. The sentences are usually constructed correctly, but many of the sentences are started the same way. There is an expressive asepct to this passage, but some work could be done to strengthen the fluency.","dateCreated":"1260229444","smartDate":"Dec 7, 2009","userCreated":{"username":"meggsullivan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/meggsullivan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}